九年级中考写作训练.ppt

请用“返璞归真”的思维用英语表达下列各句： 1. 科目选择性强 Teenagers can choose many subjects. There are many subjects for students to choose. 2. 英语水平提高快 Teenagers can improve their English fast. 3. 与世界各国学生交流 Teenagers can talk with students from all over the world. 4. 了解各国文化 Teenagers can learn about foreign cultures. 5. 费用高 Teenagers’ studying abroad costs a lot. It’s expensive to study abroad. 6. 听课困难 Teenagers can’t understand the teachers in class. 请用“返璞归真”的思维用英语表达下列各句： 1. 情节有趣、通俗易懂。 The historical plays are interesting and easy to understand. 2. 资料真实、引人深思。 The books can tell them the true stories. Readers can learn and think a lot from them while reading. 科目选择性强（subjects, choose不会怎么办？） 他们了解各国文化(culture不会怎么办？) 英语迅速提高（improve不会怎么办？） 要生活在一个不同的环境(environment不会怎么办) 千金一词（第二词汇） 同义化： 1.should: 2. many: 3. not like: 4. like : 具体化: 1.unhappy: 2. cook: 有意识地使用“定语从句”和“被动语态” 表示句子间逻辑关系 1.如果 2. 尽管；虽然 3.因为；因此　４.为了 5．如此．．．以至　６．两者都不　 7．不是…而是 ８．直到 9.直到…才 10. 否则 表示动作发生时间关系 1.一……就…… 2.当……时候 3.（一直）…自从（时间点） 4. 在...之前 5. 表示先后顺序的词 试着用今天学到的方法完成这篇文章吧！ * 书面表达训练策略 中考复习 郑 州 八中 张瑞 （衢州，2012） 假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。 ? …… 感受 骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏…… 活动 北山公园(the North Hill Park) 地点 你和…… 参加者 上周末 时间 A pleasant outing 主要问题 1.层次不清晰 2. 拼写和语法错误多 3. 汉语思维痕迹过重 A pleasant Outing Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very hap