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机判与手判相比所带来的一些细微变化。 1．机判会使阅卷老师更注重考生书面表达文章的整体流畅感（既文章的整体观、和谐一致感和大局观）。 2．机判加大了对考生文字书写规范、清晰、工整的要求。 3．机判在一定程度上加大了阅卷老师评分的“档次”差距。 评分标准有几档？每一档的标准又是怎样的？ 五档 1-6分 动了笔，仅罗列了不成句的单词，未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者。 7-12分 未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 13-18分 基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 19-24分 完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。 25-30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 sample 考生作文实录（一） Take me for example, there was a time when my English was poor. I’m study hard, but my hard didn’t have paid off. I’m very upset. I asked my teacher for help, my teacher told me , if you can reading English loudly everymorning, I believe you will have improved. Yes, my spoken English was so poor that I never spoken English in class , it made me can’t remember the English word. So I began to change myself. I reading English loudly and ignored my classmates laught. I can remember English word. It was no doubt that my English have a big improved. I’m succeed. In a word .If you want to change your life. Change yourself first, you will be succeed. Take me for example, there was a time when my English was poor. I’m study hard, but my hard didn’t have paid off. I’m very upset. I asked my teacher for help, my teacher told me , if you can reading English loudly everymornong, I believe you will have improved. Yes, my spoken English was so poor that I never spoken English in class , it made me can’t remember the English word. So I began to change myself. I reading English loudly and ignored my classmates laught. I can remember English word. It was no doubt that my English have a big improved. I’m succeed. In a word .If you want to change your life. Change yourself first, you will be succeed. 考生作文实录（二） For example, I’m a student, every time I am in exam, I always answer questions so quickly that I don’t see the questions clearly, so I often make mistakes in some easy questions. In my life , when I deal with problems, I’m also like this. There’s no doubt that I always have difficulties in dealing w