雅思语言提升 新航道内参课件.ppt

语言提升 Language Improvement 1. 表达漏洞百出 可读性相当差 In China, because its tradition, the old is most raised by their children. In China, because of its tradition, the old are mostly supported by their children. 2. 表达捉襟见肘 词句鲜有亮点 越来越多的刚刚毕业的大学生发现找到好工作是越来越难。 More and more college graduates who have just graduated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult 2. 表达捉襟见肘 词句鲜有亮点 1. More and more college graduates who have just graduated from university find that finding a good job is more and more difficult. 2. A growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult. 3. A growing number of fresh graduates find that being employed by a decent employer is increasingly difficult. 4. The difficulty of being employed by a decent employer is on the rise, as the number of fresh graduates grows. Language 语言提升 语言质量提升（一） 词汇篇 12个五星级高频词的升级替换 是 有… 能… 很… 重要 著名 很多 应该 解决 越来越 有好处 有坏处 是 工作是生活的一个主要的部分。(高P182) Working is a major part of life. → A person’s working career constitutes a major part of their life. 是 人们普遍认为，自我价值是每个人最重要的精神追求之一。 It is a common belief that self-worth and self-realization constitutes one of the most important spiritual pursuits for every individual. (091219: People are happier with less possessions // 08.08.16 : business people are motivated by money) 在知识为本的时代，学历是找工作之必需。 In this knowledge-based world, academic qualifications are generally regarded as essential for securing a decent job. 是 如果决定是错误的，没有个体能够负责。 No single individual can be held accountable if the decision turns out to be wrong. 对老年员工来说，去熟悉年轻同事需要较长时间，也（是）更困难（的）。 Getting familiar with younger colleagues usually takes longer and appears to be more difficult for senior workers. 小结 构成（是）constitute 被视作是： be regarded / considered as be believed to be 结果是：turn out to 被证明是: prove to be 似乎是：seem / appear to be 有 武汉有一千万人。 武汉有丰富的水资源。 武汉有很多著名大学。 have / there are? possess, own be home to 我来自武汉，它有一千万百万人。 I come from