英语建议信写作.pptVIP

Persuade the architect in a polite way I hope you will not mind me writing to ask.. I wonder if… It would be handy to have lifts… So I’d like to suggest that…. Perhaps there could be…. Thank you for reading my letter. I hope my suggestions will… task 1 Paraphrase(改写 )-------the Greeting Part Dear Mr. Smith, Are you the architect to build the supermarket? I am writing to tell you the design is not ok, you mustn’t design it for the disabled like that. So you should listen to my advice: Dear Mr. Smith, I learn from the local news that you are the architect who is to design the supermarket. I am writing to ask you to consider the right of the disabled for easy access. In particular, I would like you to consider the following things: Use the suggestions you collect to finish this part, there should be a topic sentence in each paragraph . 感谢您阅读我的信，希望您能赞成我的建议。 Thank you for reading my letter, I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. 残疾人应该和健全人有同样的机会来享受购物。 Disabled people should have the same opportunities as able-bodied people to enjoy shopping. 如果你采纳我的建议，我肯定超市会吸引更多的顾客，人们会高度评价你的设计， If you adopt my suggestions, I am sure the supermarket will attract more customers and people will speak highly of your design. Discuss the problems that people with walking difficulties might have in a cinema. The Heading( address, date) The body The signature (name) The Greeting and your purpose to write the letter Suggestions Persuade the architect again to take the suggestions A letter of suggestion Situation: An architect (Mr. Smith) is designing a supermarket in your community, and a boy wrote a letter of suggestion to him. Can you give some suggestions to the architect, remember to use polite forms. Discussion Task 2 Writing the Suggestion Part Task 3 Translating the Ending Part Homework Write a letter of suggestion to the architect. A B C Participation ?A B C Writing skills ?A B C Communication ?A B C New words ?A B