【优化方案】(浙江、江苏)2016高考英语二轮复习 第二部分 题型突破 专题五 书面表达课件.ppt

(1) 具体性原则 在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似a nice/good man的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如kind-hearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easy-going(随和的)等。 ①I will have my own family probably with a lovely child. ②It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. (2)新颖性原则 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 ①In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult. →In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging. ②So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are sure to achieve success. →So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are bound to achieve success. (3)短语优先原则 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 ①Developing a good habit is also important. →Developing a good habit is also of importance. ②As the number of English learners is increasing，it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. →As the number of English learners is on the rise，it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. ③I was going to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly. →I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly. (4)避免重复原则 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 ①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. ②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be. →We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 常见高级写作词汇必备 1．第一first→to begin/start with 2．第二second→in addition/what’s more 3．最后finally→last but not least 4．总之in a word→to sum up/in conclusion/in summary 5．但是but→however 6．机会