咨询暑期学习班.ppt

咨询信 —— 参加暑期英语学习班 没注意“6周”和后面咨询的课程的关系，后面应该只针对6周的课程来提出问题。 自我介绍要不要写？ 漏写盼回复。 问句的表达语序混乱，或没有谓语动词，句不成句。 存在问题 审题 假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况（箭头所指内容） 注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇：住宿accommodation Dear Sir or Madam, __________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 简单自我介绍 写申请信的背景 Dear Sir or Madam, Yours faithfully, Li Hua 列提纲 1. 简单自我介绍。写咨询信的背景。 2. 咨询的内容。 3. 盼回复。 我是李华，中国学生，暑假去英国学习英语，为期六周，对你们的广告感兴趣，特此咨询。 start dates? class size? hours per week? how much? type of accommodation? 成文 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m Li Hua, a student from China, planning to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Having read your advertisement, I find the six-week course quite fits me, so I’m writing to ask for more details about it. First, I’d like to make sure when the course will start, what size each class is and how many hours we will learn per week. Besides, the fees are not so clear in the ad, so I’m eager to know exactly how much I have to pay for the course. Last but not least, as for the accommodation, it would be better if you could tell me whether it will be a host family or a university dormitory. I’ll really appreciate it if you are kind enough to inform me of the concerning details at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your reply! Yours faithfully, Li Hua