北京高考应用文写作作文讲评.ppt

To write a notice better 第二节 假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华,下周学校将举办“才艺大赛”。请你将以下信息通过广播通知国际部的学生。 Time:next Friday afternoon Place:School Concert Hall 3.Talents:singing,dancing,painting,acting,playing an instrument... 4.Deadline for registration:4pm next Monday at the School Office 审题 注意： 1.词数不少于50；参考词汇：Talent Show; sign up 文章包括以上要点，。不要逐条翻译。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头已给出，不计入总数。 内容 时态： 1 2 3 4 5 ? time place talents deadline for registration 增加信息 第二节 将来时和现在时 句子 第二节 time: 1.My school will hold a Talent Show next Friday afternoon. 2. There will be a Talent Show next Friday afternoon. 句子 第二节 place: 1. Next Friday afternoon, a Talent Show will be held at School Concert Hall. 2. We will hold a Talent Show at School Concert Hall. 句子 第二节 talents: 1.If you have some talents, such as singing...,you can sign up. 2. If you have talents, for example singing..., welcome to join in. 3. You can perform singing... and so on. 4. If you are good at singing..., you can sign up at the School Office. 句子 第二节 deadline: 1.Students who want to join the show can sign up before 4:00 next Monday at the school office. 2. You can sign up at the School Office and the deadline for registration is 4 pm next Friday. 3. You can sign up from now on. 句子 第二节 增加信息: 1.I am Li Hua, the president of Students’ Union. 2. I am the chairman of Students’ Union. 3.I want to tell you something about an activity. 4. I have good news to tell you. 5. I hope you can sign up, and have a good time. 6. I hope everyone can take part in this show. 7. We will look forward to your talents. 8. We also welcome you to watch the show. 1.We on next Friday afternoon at school Concert Hall. _________________________ 2.The Talent Show will hold on the School Concert Hall. _______________________________________ 3.Deadline for registration on 4pm next Monday at the school Office. _______________________________________ 4.I encourage students positive enter the show. _______________________________________ 7.You can singing ________________________