淡化雅思写作模板套用痕迹 轻松获得考官青睐.pdfVIP

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 淡化雅思写作模板套用痕迹 轻松获得考官青睐 本文将主要通过分析双边结构类型作文中比较常见的话题，为考生 分析如何淡化雅思写作模版套用痕迹，使文章更为灵活。 更多内容欢迎访问 智课教育安徽留学 或拨打0551询 真题链接：In some countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 我们一起结合此题，对双边结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个 简单的对比。 1. 引言段 引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作，对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论 怎样书写，切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式： 模板语言： Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a very controversial one. Those who criticize……. argue that……, but people who advocate……, on the other hand, maintain that…… 这样的模板相信大家不会陌生，它曾经受到无数考生的青睐。但是 我们说过，这样过于机械的语言，很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解 ， 更为糟糕的是，你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的! 下面我们就做一个简单的对比： 非模板语言： No matter in which country, children are, without any exception, regarded as the protected in society, not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work(调用背景知识 ，引出话题).The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转换 ，自然流露双边讨论倾向) 2. 主体段 模板语言： 1. The benefits of…… can be perceived in many aspects. In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 / 语言论证。In the second place, 分论点二. 论证. 2. However, ……has also given rise to a lot of problems. For one thing,……For another……, Finally,…… 在传统的模板里 ，双边结构的主体段只是简单地分段论证两方面的 观点 ，虽然将两种对立观点展现的非常清晰 ，但是也难免落入模式化的 俗套。 更多内容欢迎访问 智课教育安徽留学 或拨打0551询 做一个简单的对比： 非模板语言： a. 让步分析 Admittedly, hardship and bitterness of life could drive people to become mature. Under working pressure, children think about finishing their tasks before the deadline instead of concerning how to kill their seemingly limitless free time. Work may be the only priority of their life. It is fairly different between taking a dollar from their parents and earning one by themselves