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图画展示了小女孩欢迎她母亲回家的情形。 意识到她母亲工作了一天一定很累，她帮母亲那包。 这让我想起了我的母亲，她做了她能做的一切让我捅有最好的生活。 我整天忙于自己的学习，忽视了母亲的需要和感受，总是认为好好学习是我唯一能回报他们的。 这幅图画让我确信一个好女儿比好学生更重要。 The picture shows a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying is the only thing I could do in return. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student. 事实上， 我当班长后才意识到合作的重要性。 我问老师他给我些如何与人合作的建议。 团队合作能让我远离麻烦让工作更有效而不是单独行动 In fact, I didn’t realize its importance until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. Then I turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. 1.然而，使我们遗憾的是很多人倾向于忽略因特网普及所带来的负面影响。regret 我们遗憾的是to our regret It’s a pity feel regretful Unfortunately, We regret It is to be regretted that 倾向于tend to / trend / have a trend/ tendency 忽略neglect; overlook, be blind to / pay no attention to 因特网普及所带来的负面影响the negative effects of 2.目前的形势需要政府的帮助和个人的努力。require 目前的形势 present situation take the present situation into consideration 3.但是很多学生和父母反对这个观点，认为取消文理分科意味着给学生增加更多的压力，而关注更少的科目能够让学生在具体的领域出类拔萃。(mean) Be against / disapprove of/ object to/ be strongly opposed to/ take the opposite point of view cancel its departmental system more pressure / an increased pressure in specific areas be far above the average; outstanding 4. 百分之二十的人认为完全就业是个不现实的目标，因此他们选择继续深造或上技校学习实用技巧来为将来的事业做准备。(prepare/ preparation) achieve full employmentmake further studies technical school/Several Useful/Practical Skills/ 5.另一方面，大部分学生（70%）不同意老师撕掉练习册的答案，因为这不方便他们核对答案，不利于提高自主学习能力。 (disagree.) Rub off inconvenient suffer great