高考英语写作高策略[课件].pptVIP

;;;;Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?;影响给分的因素之二： 　　　　　　　文中所采用的语言材料;Practice;改变句子结构,与众不同 ;改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化 ;使用强势句式，增强语句表现力 ;影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅; and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that...;如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？;　　　　　　William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达)　　Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both written by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! 　　Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! 　　Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to play my role well.;步骤四: 检查;小结： 1. 作文的卷面； -----整洁的卷面 2. 文章的语言； -----丰富的词汇 3. 行文的流畅； -----流畅的结构 4. 文章的思想； -----独到的见解;常用句子;常用句子;常用句子;常用句子;常用句子;Dear Tom, Im LiHua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. The other day, I learned quite by chance that you were in need of a book to help you improve your Chinese. I happen to have one , which I think might help you. The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life , but it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it has been popular with the readers ever since it came out two years ago. If it is convenient to you, lets meet at 3:00 p.m. this Sunday, at the entrance to the Peoples Park, where I can give you the book face to face . If not , try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. Best wishes