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初一英语下考试作文讲解作文题目： Let’s go to Expo 2010 Shanghai China Time July 30 to Aug 5, 2010 Weather Very hot and about 27.4 C City Transport Bus, taxi, ferry Interests 　 　　Pavilion (展览会的) 展示馆方法与评析：一、关于审题：二、从评分标准看写好英语作文的方法。　　说明：先根据文章整体内容确定档次，然后再档次内评出分数。　　第一档（10 – 8 分）　　1．所写的内容符合要求，有适当发挥。　　2．句子较通顺并恰当运用连词。　　3．单词拼写语法错误不超过五个。　　第二档（７―５分）　　1．所写内容基本符合要求。　　2．有少量句子表达错误，但尚可读懂。　　3．单词拼写语法错误不超过８个。　　第三档（４－２分）　　1．所写内容要点不全。　　2．句子表达有错误，影响理解。　　3．单词拼写语法错误不超过１０个。　　第四档（１－０分）　　1．所写的内容与要求不相关　　2．只有少数单词，内有正确句子。小结：　　这说明，任何考场作文都是要点现行的。首先要做到要点齐全，如果要点不全首先进入三档，在本文中就是表格的四项内容都要是齐全的。实例与又一关键：　　那是不是说要点齐全了，而且运用了应该用的语言就算是好作文了呢？请大家阅读下面的文章。Dear Tom,　　I am very happy to write to you, because my holiday is coming. Let’s go to the Expo in Shanghai this summer. We will stay in Shanghai from July 30th to August 5th. The weather will be very hot. The city transport includes bus, taxi, and ferry. We will visit China pavilion for its Chinese culture. We can go to the USA pavilion for its music and dance. We can go to Australia pavilion for it traveling information. We can also go to Space Home pavilion to learn science.　　I hope to hear from you soon.　　Yours,　　Li Ming　　点评：　　这篇文章要点齐全，作者也用到了应该用的语言，但是如果给分的话，只能给５、６分，因为它的语言太平了，没有亮点，没有合理运用连词，也没有适当的解释说明，这就造成了文章读上去比较干涩。如果给文章做适当的润色的话，效果会好很多。Dear Tom,　　I am very happy to write to you, because my holiday is coming. Let’s go to the Expo in Shanghai this summer. We will stay in Shanghai from July 30th to August 5th. The weather will be very hot, so bring a pair of sunglasses and some cool clothes. The city transport includes bus, taxi, and ferry. Taking bus is a good idea. It saves money. We will visit China pavilion for its Chinese culture. We can go to the USA pavilion for its music and dance. If we still have time, we can go to Australia pavilion for it traveling information. We can also go to Space Home pavilion to learn science. What do you think of my plan？　　I hope to hear from you soon.　　Yours,　　Li Ming　　点评：　　大家看，如果加上适当的解释说明，给文章润色，文章读起来