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智课网TOEFL备考资料新托福考试写作剖析及真题范文[PDF高清文本] 摘要： 新托福考试写作剖析及真题范文，本文这篇文章是由小马培训班的一位专家提供的，小马托福25+考前冲刺班刘老师近期发现了一些在托福写作培训班中，托福写作程度差不多的学生，培训后取的得的效果有好有坏，这是为什么呢？下面小编就通过新托福考试写作剖析及真题范文——这篇文章来为大家详细介绍一下，希望对大家的托福考试会有 新 托福 考试写作剖析及真题范文，首相我们通过对一些 托福写作 文章的剖析，让你明白 托福考试 的重点考核内容在哪里?尽可能的在考场上少失分，然后我们再通过托福写作真题范文中的模板和核心词汇完善我们的句型，尽可能获得满分，下面我们来看看 新托福 考试写作剖析及真题范文的完整内容。 新托福考试写作剖析及真题范文: 文章说记录医学(electronic medical record)要比 paper based 好，理由： 1 省钱(减少 storage 和运输费用) 2 减少错误发生 3 提供 research data。促进医学研究。 listening 反驳阅读 1 医生即使有电子记录仍然会留一份 paper record(作为应急使用) 2 医生喜欢用 paper 记录(在 examine patient 的时候)，然后让别的人把记录输入进电脑，这样更容易出错(由于 poor handwriting)。 3 医学病历不可以随便用，有法律保护的，只有所有者同意才能使用，所以依然麻烦 The reading material presents us with three proofs which certifies the idea that electronic medical records are superior to paper-based ones. However, the listening material disputes this idea with another three factors. According to the reading, electronic medical record saves money because it reduces fees of storage and transportation. However, the professor of the lecture maintains that even though doctors have electronic medical records, they would also keep a paper record in case emergencies happen. In addition, the passage holds the view that electronic record largely reduces the happening of mistakes. By contrast, the lecturer holds that mistakes are more likely to happen because doctors prefer to keep records of patients in the paper when they examine patients and then put the records into computer. Poor handwriting could lead to serious errors. Ultimately, the writer takes the attitude that electronic medical records help establish a data base which promotes medical research. On the other hand, the professor disputes that medical records should not be too easily accessible and they are protected by law. Only when you get the owner’s agreement can you use the records. Therefore, it is still troublesome to use a data base of medical records.(198) 以上就是新托福考试写作剖析及真题范文的部分内容，完整版内容，我们可以通