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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 犯罪 A 大城市竞争激烈B 经济和心理压力大C 年轻人犯罪解决 Intense competition economic pressures release negative emotions A: 影视作品追求收视率R: 接触承认内容 E ：年轻人模仿 Boost ratings, exposed to adult content ，fall into a life of crime led astray A 政府加强教育宣传R 认识到犯罪严重性E 少年犯罪率下降 Launch awareness campaigns, dire consequences of crimes, curb crime 年轻人应注重培养各方面的能力(receive a well-rounded education) b. 提高年轻人的 竞争力 （increase competitiveness ）c. 解决生存问题(make a decent living)，年轻人 犯罪率下降 Juvenile delinquency has become a widespread problem in some urban areas and it is important to tackle this problem. The competition is intense in cities and this is possibly a primary cause of soaring youth crime. Young people are likely to face some problems that cause economic pressures, and it is difficult for them to find well-paid jobs and afford property. They may choose to commit crimes to release negative emotions or sometimes to earn a fast buck. Another reason is that media companies give importance to the coverage of violence and crime in order to boost ratings. Exposure to violence can have a negative effect on young peoples perception of violence, and they do not realise the consequences of their behaviour. As a consequence, they may fall into a life of crime. This is particularly the case for those who lack self-control. To solve this problem, governments should launch awareness campaigns, which enable young adults to understand the dire consequences of crimes. It is therefore easier to curb crime. Young people should also receive a well-rounded education and improve skills. Education can provide them with oppoirtunities to increase competitivenes and make a decent living. This will also lead to a lower crime rate. To summarise, I believe that competition and the media are responsible for juvenil