李润生老师写作课.pptVIP

最精准和科学的提分方案 从4.5到5.5，从5.5到6.5，从6.5 到7.5 十月写作如何过6.5 小作文： 线图，柱图，饼图，流程图 大作文： 教育类，科技类，社会生活类，政府政策类 5.5 与6.5分作文的5点根本区别 1，小作文的对比思路 2，图表作文中描述数据的句型多样性问题 3，议论文的观点表达的批判性句型 4，主体段内容的细化思维（话题词伙） 5，“具有细化思维和批判性性思维的有逻辑推进是得七分的关键” 十月份热点话题—1小时教你过6.5 “ 李润生十大必背段落结构” 1，教育类 2，科技类 3，社会生活类 4，政府政策类 雅思议论文的四大题型 1，讨论题（discuss the both views) 优先四段式结构 2，辩论题 (to what extent to you agree or disagree) （五段式—先抑后扬（可写2段自己支持观点） 3，报告型(what are the causes and effects) （可四段也可五段） 4，组合型( do you agree or disagree? How can you explain it ?)（五段式） “ 李润生十大必背段落结构” 四大类结构： 1，让步式 2，罗列式 3，直接式 4，批判式 李润生十大必背段落结构 教育类话题（1）： Nowadays, in many countries, universities accept more students. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 李润生十大必备段落（1）批判式： (论点）Although this practice does bring about some benefits in terms of the development, the drawbacks it exerts on the educational level, the employment of the college leavers and the society are more obvious. 十大必背段落结构（1）让步式 Admittedly, accepting more students offers some advantages, because the more educated people there are, the faster the development of a nation’s economy will be. It is especially the case in many developed countries, such as Japan and Germany. 十大必背段落结构罗列式(1) However, reaching the above-mentioned conclusion does not mean the same as assuming that we should turn a blind eye to its drawbacks. Indeed, with more students being accepted, a nation’s educational quality will be negatively affected for there will be the insufficiency in teachers and teaching facilities. It has already happened in many developing countries. In addition, it is this practice that results in the high unemployment of the college graduates. A recent survey conducted in china convincingly shows that about 40 percent college graduates remain unemployed. Nobody ,I am sure, would like to see this. What is the most serious lies in the fact that some universities accept more students just for the sake of money. Not only is it detrimental to the individuals