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原因及解决方案 Para.1 Introduction Para.2 Reason Para.3 Solution Para.4 Conclusion The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world. Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem. (2010年12月18日考题) 开头段（Introduction） S1: In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts.（背景）（话题）I will analyse possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.（原因+解决方案） 主体段1（Reason） S1: It is obvious that the causes of the increase in juvenile delinquency are diverse.（主题句 S3: As a result, it is possible for them to be led astray easily. S4: What is more, most young criminals are poorly-educated, so they are not aware of the consequences of their behavior. S5: Thirdly, the environment in which the children are raised plays a key role. S6: By that I mean most youth offenders come from families with domestic violence or parental neglect, so their emotional needs cannot be satisfied. 主体段2（Solution） S1: The solutions to this issue should also be varied.（主题句legislation to crack down on media pornography and violence. S3: Furthermore, compulsory education should be implemented for it can help to raise a healthier, happier and more well-behaved young generation. S4: Last but not least, families should ensure that their children grow up in an environment full of affection and free from violence. 结尾段（Conclusion） S1: To conclude, three factors contribute to the surge of youth crime. S2: I am convinced that only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will the rate of juvenile delinquency drop. 原因1 论据1 原因2 原因3 论据3 解决方案1 解决方案2 解决方案3 衔接手段+概括原因 概括解决方案