【2017年整理】专四写作技巧之二段落要求.pptVIP

Writing of TEM-4;TEM-4的段落要求;TEM-4的段落要求---一致性;Sample 2 (1) My favorite reading material is science fiction because I enjoy using my imagination. (2) When I involve myself in fantastic situation in the distant future, my mind seems to open up, and I feel more alive; my imagination is full of spaceships, time warps, anti-matter, and black holes. (3) Maybe that is why I am doing so poor in my school work. (4) I simply hate to read dry, technical prose-you know, the kind you find in your text books. (5) My teacher thinks that I am lazy, and some think my speculations are idle daydreams. (6) I know that scientific and technical progress is made by people who dream and imagine and speculate– who live at least a part of their lives in the future. (7) That is why I recommend science fiction to any one interested in his or her creative abilities. ;Sample 3;TEM-4的段落要求---发展性;Sample 1 From my point of view, the new library is quite excellent as regards the scale and the structure. However, there are still some serious problems in it. What comes first is the sheer volume of books and the variety of magazines. Many of us complain that there are not enough books for us to choose from. Although the shelves of the library are spacious, it seems there are not enough books to fill them up. Then comes the quality of books. They are not new and some of them are even worn out. I suggest that these books be removed and updated. ;段落发展的危险性;Sample 2 I am greatly honored to write to you to report a severe problem. We live very far from the teaching area and we have to ride to the classroom every day. The problem is that there is no lamp on the way to our dormitories. In the evening it is dark all around. We can see only stars in the sky and feeble light in the distance. The sharp lights from coming vehicles would hurt our eyes and we can see nothing. The girl’s screaming from crashes is the usual occurrence. We must be careful enough to keep away from the bleary objects; otherwise