2012一模作文(参加拓展训练和站在船上远望)new.pptVIP

情景作文: 假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你参加的一次拓展训练活动。请根据图片的先后顺序，用英语为校刊写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 参考词汇：Outward Bound 拓展训练 ;写作要求:;评分原则;评分原则;评分细则; 时态、人称的使用得当与否视为判断语言质量高低的依据； 逻辑不通，相应降一档。 ;审题: 1.文体: 记叙文 2.时态: 一般过去时 3.人称: 第一人称 4.内容要点： 1. 到达拓展训练基地 （乘校车，分组，教练介绍拓 展课程） 2. 跳跃断桥 （跳跃前心理；跳跃后感受） 3. 翻越逃生墙 （组员相互帮助；翻越成功的感受） 4. 集体照相留念 （获奖） 5. 对整个活动的感受;主要问题: 审题：图1 （出发—到达 ）少要点（集体留影）; 时态混用 （一般现在） 单词拼写：devide—divided 用词不准：separate—divide basement—base reward—award 5. 动词形式：flied—flew leaded—led standed—stood 6. 词性混乱：brave a.—bravery n. cross v.—across prep.;语言积累： arrive at …by school bus / on the school bus 乘校车到达 be divided into groups 分小组 jump over/across the broken bridge 跳跃断桥 climbing over the wall to escape 翻越逃生墙 join hands in joint/common effort 携手共同努力 cooperate with each other 互相协作 have a photo taken with our coach 与教练和影 be awarded for our courage and teamwork获勇气奖团结奖;主题句： Last Friday, my class took part in a meaningful and challenging course—Outward Bound. Last Friday I, together with my classmates joined in an Outward Bound, which … Last Friday, I participated in an Outward Bound, where my schoolmates and I spent a wonderful time. This unique experience impressed me a lot and I think I will always cherish it. ;图1 Early in the morning, we got to an Outward Bound centre on our school bus. Upon arrival, we were divided into several groups and our coach introduced the course to us. Early in the morning, we arrived at the destination in high spirits by school bus. The coach divided us into three groups and introduced the arrangements of the following activities to us. Each of us looked forward to the coming activities.;图2： Shortly afterwards, we got