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提笔三问 时态、人称、分段？; ;注意： 首尾打草稿 下面空的行数不超过两行 不要涂改，只要画两条横线;作文注意点： 1.恰当的连接词起润滑作用，保证文章的舒畅 （禁止使用and. So. But..等简单连接词) 2. “拿来主义”在作文中的使用（试卷） 3. 看懂 认识的不是自己的,写出来才是自己的 套句的使用（平时的积累） 4.词汇,词组,句型的筛选原则 (平时练习中,最先在脑海中出现的全部枪毙,有意识的培养使用高级句型的习惯) 5. 语言大于内容 6. 首尾段不允许出现错误（尤其尤其是第一段） 注意： 句式表达中要慎用there be 句型 （There are some problems need to be solved) ;恰当的连接词起润滑作用，保证文章的舒畅 （禁止使用and. So. But..等简单连接词)for example： 第一，第二，第三 表示例举 To begin with, what’s more, in addition, finally; eventually; last but not least On the one hand, on the other hand, moreover, aside from this, 表示因果：due to ; as a result of Therefore, thus, so , therefore, as a result ;as a consequence 表示转折： however; nevertheless; ;而且，除此之外： furthermore; moreover; besides; what’s more; in addition; on top of …; 表结论，总之 to conclude ; in conclusion ; to sum up ; （all in all; in a word；） on the whole 表示尽管：while ; though ; as ; despite /in spite of 即使：even though ; even if 最为重要的是：Most important of all; What’s more important. 原因一，原因二：for one thing, for another ;本篇作文共性问题（Problems）;1.关联词应用过于简单，缺乏新意，没有阅读欲望，流畅地道性打了较大折扣。 First, it can help you reduce the pressure. Second, it is beneficial to your health. Third, it can make you more brave..... To begin with, laughter enables you to reduce the pressure, leading to having a good mood everyday. In addition, laughter can lower hypertension, which is of great benefit to our health. What’s more, it is of much use overcoming the shyness, helping you develop confidence to face every difficulty we meet in our life.....;Make sb do 短语过滥 It can 。。。。 we should。。。;牢记以下句型;3.Some effective measures should be taken to …(solve the problem).(被动) 应该采取措施来做。。。 4…., which makes it possible for sb. to do sth….(非限制定语从句) 遇到困难时我们要坚强，我们才有可能在将来获得成功。 We are supposed to keep strong-minded in time of difficulty, which makes it possible for us to gain success in future. 5….,which leads to sth. / doing sth. //cause sb. to do sth.(非限制定语从句) 许多人缺少保护环境的意识，这对地球导致了许多污染。 Many people lack the awareness