陕西考区高中考试英语写作点评.pptxVIP

英语资料 　　亲爱的同学们，首先祝贺大家顺利结束高考。对于今年的英语作文，大家应该感到异常开心，因为实际就是我在课堂强调多次的模版都给烂了的现象类的议论文。对于“周五读报活动”这个现象的看法，分析原;因，最后提出自己的建议，简直一模一样，一点不差。只是需要在前面加一个称谓，因为是演讲稿。我们在课堂强调的句型和词汇全部可以派上用场，你用了没有。大家来看看吧，是不是全部是我们课堂强调过的内容。而且，关;于“读书活动周”，我们在强化班也讲过，很类似这次的“读报活动”，你可以去翻翻讲义的第五讲。　　某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知，内容要点和要求写一篇英语发言稿。　　内容要点：　　1 你对“周五读报;活动”的看法。　　2 陈述你的理由(可举例说明)。　　3 你的具体建议。　　My dear classmates,　　Our monitor suggests that we have Friday;News Hour. As to this activity, I really suppose it is beneficial to us students. The reasons are;as follows. ( There are a couple of reasons as follows.)　　To begin with, we can open our horizon and;enlarge our konwledge by reading newspaper　　because it contains a lot of information. In addition,;reading newspaper enables us to get closer to the world and know what happened at present at home an;d abroad. For example, we may know more information about the massive earthquake in Sichuan the torc;h relay of the Olympic Games in deferrent places. Last but not least, students may stay away from ne;tbar due to the attraction of reading newspaper.　　From my perspective As far as Im concerned, the a;ctivity should be held regularly on Friday. Apart from this, we can have some heated discussion base;d on what we have read in newspwper.　　I do believe this activity will be of great benefit to us and;attract every single student.　　范文解析：　　1. as to “就什么来说”， as to the climate ( 讲西安我的家乡时讲过)　　2. suppose;“我认为”，有很多词来替换think包括 hold the viwe that, consider　　3. be beneficial tobe of great benefit to “对什么有好处;”，我的嘴都说出泡的表达。　　4. The reasons are as follows. “原因如下”，强调过N次的模版句。　　5. to begin with in addition apart;fromlast but not least 也是说破嘴的逻辑词　　6.open ones horizen 开阔视野 enlarge ones knowledge 增长知识　　7.at home;and abroad “国内外”　　8. enable sb to so sth “使某人做某事”，我们讲义上还有　　9. torch relay 这是我在各个班最后都提到的“火炬传递”，高考阅卷下周;二在外院开始，老师们看到这个很新颖的举例，你的分数自然不会低　　10. due to “由于”，to是介词，当时还讲了owning to, thanks to ,进行了区别　　11. from my;perspective as far as im concerned “就我来看”，我讲过N+1次的　　12. heated discussion “激烈讨论”，正反观点类模版第一句中讲过