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Assessment Sheet Results, Discussion Conclusion 20 % Ss Number: S201305026 Name: 盖江照 Class: 13 Group: 5 College: 环能学院 Major: 动力工程及工程热物理 （注：所挑出的句子中的关键词请下划线标明，其他要求同上两次作业） PAPER INFORMATION Title of the Paper ：（1）Melting Characteristics of Iron Ore Fine During Sintering Process （2） Simulation of the change of sintering neck between two grains in two dimensions Number of Pages： （1）5 ； （2）8 Reasons for choosing the paper ：relate to the future research and study Ⅰ. LANGUAGE 5% MARK:______ Lexical Features Highly-Technical Words ①Basicity 碱度 ①phase diagram 相图 ①hematite赤铁矿 ①limonite褐铁矿 ①thermodynamics 热力学 ①kinetics 动力学 ①viscosity粘度 ①calcium ferrite 铁酸钙 ②Sintering 烧结 ②characteristic time时间常数 ②surface free energy表面自由能 ②coefficient系数 Semi-Technical Words with Specific Meaning in your subject (请注明该词在自己专业的汉语意思) Fine 粉末 ②grain 晶粒 Non-technical words (formal common words) ①Reproducibility重复性 ①curves 曲线 ①intersection 交点 ①factor 因素 ①granules 小颗粒 ①fluctuation 波动 ②Radius 半径 ②equilibrium 平衡 ②angle 角度 ②two-dimensional 二维 ②parameter 参数 ②Shrinkage 收缩 ②computation计算 ②shape形状 ②arc弧 ②substitution替代 ②equation方程 ②simplification简单化 Use of noun phrases with expanded pre or post-modification （有扩展的前置或后置修饰语的名词词组） Melting curve 溶解曲线 ②mass transport mechanism 质量传递机理 ②grain-boundary diffusion mechanism 晶界扩散机制 Words and phrases communicating data/quantity Adjectives or adverbs that make the size/quantity look big, small, high, low or similar/close to another: considerable amount of ; barely 23% ; even higher/even lower, almost all/Almost half of…, etc. Lower temperature ①greater extent ①higher basicity Use of “hedging/Vague expressions”模糊限制语 (要有句子，模糊限制语下划线标明) it has not the step of rapid shrinking, mostly because of its lower CaO addition which results in high liquidius temperature……① the viscosity of melt s or suspension melts may change as basicity changes. ① ……ore B has bigger value of T1 than ore A, implying