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社会热点类范文 2011年6月真题 Online Shopping 题目要求 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled on Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题。 我的建议。 审题思路 这是一篇现象解释型议论文。随着科学技术的日新月异,电脑走进了千家万户,而网购更是随着电子商务的发展而为人熟知。文章可以分为四段,首段阐述背景和现状,如果你支持网络购物,第二点可着重分析网购的好处。第三段只需陈述反对者的意见,最后一段表明自己的观点,与第二段相呼应。 写作思路 第一段:描述事实,越来越多的人热衷于网购,网上购物成为一种时尚。 第二段:有些人认为网购有诸多好处,可列举三点。 第三段:有些人则反对网购,主要原因为不安全等。 第四段:表示自己支持网购。 范文及高分点评 范文 Online Shopping In recent years, online shopping has become more and more popular. Books, clothes, household appliances, toys, hardware, software, and health insurance, just to name a few, can be bought online from online stores. (2) However, people’s views differ. Firstly, many people prefer to shop online because of the convenience it offers. Online stores are usually open around the clock, and many consumers only have time to shop after work, so online shopping seems to be the best choice in our hectic life. Furthermore, people (4) are usually presented with more choices online. Tens of thousands of stores supply different types of products to satisfy the customers. Another advantage of shopping online is the (5) competitive price and greater access to information. (6) Despite the above advantages, not everyone likes to purchase online. (7) Some people worry that the products they buy are not as good as those illustrated by the pictures. Other people may fear that their credit card information will be leaked. (8) Personally, I am in favor of online shopping since I believe all the above risks can be averted. (9) You can stick with renowned stores, or refer to the reviews of other consumers. By doing this, you can avoid being cheated. As for your credit card, you are strongly suggested to use a complex password. 高分点评 首句开篇点题,易于抓住读者的注意力。 转折句引出下文的讨论。第一段行文干净利索。 第二段是重点讨论部分,论述网购的好处。如果

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