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说明现象类作文结构 说明现象类作文一般是需要考生描述所给提纲中反映出的现象的总体情况，对该现象的原因、相关因素或影响进行解释说明，并分析该现象中可能存在的问题或将来的发展趋势。 例：Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic of The Celevration of Western Festivals. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 现在国内有不少人喜欢过西方的某些节日。 产生这种现象的原因。 这种现象可能带来的影响。 结构公式陈列 描述现象 1. nowadays/In recent years, 概述现象。2. 现象表现。3.In addition/Also, 进一步描述现象表现或变化。 描述现象 主题句：概括指出现象 扩展句一：现象的具体表现或变化 扩展句二：进一步说明现象的表现或变化 说明原因 4. Many different reasons contribute to 该现象。/There are many different factors决定该现象。5. Among them, 第一点原因或因素play/plays a critical role. 6. Moreover,第二点原因或因素。7. Besides, 第三点原因或因素 或说明影响 4. 该现象has brought great influence on影响对象。5. firstly，第一点影响。6.secondly，第二点影响。7. Finally，第三点影响。 第二段说明原因 主题句：引出下文对原因的说明。 扩展句一：说明第一点原因 扩展句二：说明第二点原因 扩展句三：说明第三点原因 或说明影响 1.主题句：引出下文对影响的说明 扩展句一：说明第一点影响 扩展句二：说明第二点影响 扩展句三：说明第三点影响 总结评述 8. In my opinion/As for me, 本人对现象的总结或述评。9.具体作出评述.10 进一步作出评述.11. 作出总结。 第三段 总结评述 主题句：可能现象的发展趋势或利或弊评述，或是本人对现象的看法。 扩展句一：具体评述 扩展句二：进一步评述 结尾句：总结全文（有时可以略去 参考范文 In recent years many Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals. Even some yongsters are paying （1①）as great attention to Christmas （1②）as our Spring Festival.（2①） In addition, other western festivals, like April Fool’s day and Valentine’s Day, are very popular among Chinese people. （3）Many reasons contribute to this phenomenon. Among them, relaxing and comfortable atmosphere from western festivals plays a critical role.(2②) Moreover, more and more Chinese people begin to learn English,（4） which provides them with more chances（5） to be exposed to western culture and festivals. （2③）Besides, many businessmen desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals to attract more customers. （6）As far as I am concerned, our paying too much attention to western festibals will（7） bring some side effects. The popularity of western festivals（8） to some extent has influence our traditions. （2