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智课网IELTS备考资料雅思写作辅导：经典错误案例分析 摘要： 小马过河雅思频道为各位考生整理了雅思写作辅导：经典错误案例分析，供考生们参考使用，更多雅思辅导请继续关注小马过河雅思频道。 同学们可以多关注一下 小马 过河发布的 雅思 考试动态。如果您还有疑问请点击下面的“立即咨询”按钮，我们的老师会给您专业的解答。 典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married…… 修改方案：观点模糊态度暧昧 典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little， only 17， and not married， so this topic is very difficult for me…… “见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕 典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily…… Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there. Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world. For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things…… “见官死”开头之三：偏离主题无轨电车 典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? I think to success， we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities， we must learn a lot of things， for example， English， music tools， and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers， our friends and from books. All in all， we can learn from many places. “见官死”开头之四：开门见山 直奔主题 In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? Ok， this topic is a very good topic. First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he l