Writing_25167.pptVIP

Write a reply to the email on page 52. giving details about when and why your classmates listen to music. Use the information from page 51 in your answer. * 假如你是李林，最近收到网友Jack的邮件，询问你的音乐爱好和你对音乐作用的看法。请根据以下提示，给Jack回一封邮件： 1. 介绍你的音乐爱好； 2. 谈谈你对音乐作用的看法。 注意：1. 词数：120左右; 2. 可适当增加细节。 审题与构思 审定主体结构 本文为e-mail回复，主要就你的音乐爱好和你对音乐作用的看法与网友进行交流。写作过程中，要依据自己的具体情况，如实回复网友的问题。 确定篇章结构 短文可分为四部分： 第一部分：开门见山，回应问题； 第二部分：说明你的音乐爱好； 第三部分：表明你对音乐作用的看法； 第四部分：结束邮件。 注意事项： 1. 本文要求回复邮件，属于应用文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。 2. 回复邮件应以收到的邮件为基础，就其所提问题作出明确答复，切忌偏离主题。 3. 注意邮件的行文和格式。 核定句子结构 常用词汇： music, listen to, enjoy, appreciate, like, MP3, campus radio, MTV, CD, favorite, classical, folk, light music, pop music, jazz ... 音乐作用： essential, important, be in a good state, reduce pressure, benefit, health, keep fit, relax, be useful for, good, character ... 过渡词汇： so, first, second, in addition, besides, what’s more ... 句型应用： form the habit of ... enjoy doing (sth.) with sth. when ... play a role in ... provide relief from so that ... have a great influence on ... 【范文展示】 Dear Jack, Thank you for your e-mail! How are you doing? You asked me something about my music hobby and my views on the role of music. So here they are. I have formed the habit of listening to music. I enjoy listening to music with an MP3 player when I have time, especially before I sleep. My favorite kinds of music are classical music and folk songs. Sometimes I listen to pop music, too. Music plays an essential role in my daily life. First, music provides relief from the cares of the day so that I can be in a good state. Second, listening to music can help me reduce pressure and benefits my health. In addition, I believe music is useful for forming one’s good character, which has a great influence on his later life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you again. Li Lin *