高中英语短文改练习.pptVIP

* 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除: 把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。 修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。 （一） One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with the piece of thread and played it happily.At that time，he sees a little girl crying by the roadsides.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her how she was crying and where her home was.When he learned about that the girl had got lost and he was looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl back home.See this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird freely so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread but the little bird flew to the blue sky. （二） One evening after work John drove away his secretary home because she fails to start her car.Not want to bother his wife，Maureen，he decided not to mention it to her.Later that night，John and Maureen was driving out to eat when John spotted a highheeled shoe hid under the passenger seat.Pointing to anything out of the passenger window to distract his wife，he picked up the shoe and tossed it out of her window.They arrived in the restaurant a short time later.When they were about to get out of car，Maureen enquired，“John，have you seen my other shoes？” （三） I bring Rose home five years ago.My neighbor Mrs.Black fell in love with her immediate she saw her.She was such lovely dog, after all.Rose also seemed to like Mrs.Black.Two years ago, however, Mrs.Black got cancer.Having been treating in hospital, she decided to receive treatment at home.Since my husband and I were busy in our work, we seldom went to see her.Three months ago, Mrs.Black died.To our surprised, her husband came to thank to us for keeping Rose one day.He said in the past several months, Rose went to accompany his wife every day before my husband and I went to work.With she around, his wife felt so warm an