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CET 4 Part I Writing 基本要求： 能就一定的话题和给定的提纲写短文，书信或便条能在内写出120词的短文I am thankful that you offer me the chance to speak here. I am impressed by the speeches of the previous candidates. Yet, I want to prove myself better for the post of chairman. Firstly, I’ve a pleasant personality. Last year, I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get along with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union. Secondly, I’m always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However, our activity schedule is slightly monotone. I’m willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable. If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will became your voice and build the Student Union into a bridge between the students and university. I’m your best choice, vote for yourself, thank you. 剖析： 该文从内容上看，全文紧扣主题，即符合题目中提纲的各项要求：一开始演讲者表达了对听众的尊敬，再对前面的选手表达了敬意，然后表达了自己的信心。从结构上看，其思路清晰，主次分明，条理得当。采用了列举和举例的手法，先表达了自己过去的工作经验，再表达了对未来工作的方法、假设和工作目标。从语言上看，演讲者很好地把握了讲演的技巧。全文采用简单句和并列句，但句型多样化，且长短句结合较好，富有节奏感和感染、号召力。全文连贯性好，基本无语言错误。 11 Points Hello, everyone. I believe I am the best choice of the post of the chairman of the Student Union. First, I have the ability which is necessary to the post of the chairman of the Student Union. I have been monitor of our class since I came to this school. In the past years, I have many interests. For example, I play basketball and football very well. My tennis is good too. Third, I have a lot of friends. Almost everyone likes me. If I were chosen to be the chairman, I’ll work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we don’t want. I believe, I am the best choice for the post of the chairman of the student union. Thank you. 剖析： 此文属11分档。表达了题目规定的内容，思想表达清楚，文字连贯。从内容上看，思路清晰，主次分明，没有无关的信息。但稍欠丰富，论证缺乏力度。因为个人爱好不等于个人的组织才能。若将第二理由与第一理由对调，给人以循序渐进的感觉，效果会