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什么是好的作文？ 下面先来阅读两篇作文 两篇作文的区别在哪？ 1，句式单一 2，连词欠缺，连贯性差 3，用词简单 。。。 欢迎你的光临 * * 基础写作 之 赢取高分策略 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 五个步骤 1、审题： 题材、人称、时态、要点 2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。 3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。 5。联句成文： ①主语和谓语 ②背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等） ③逻辑关系 ④开头与结尾 ⑤语篇衔接 6、检查修改，规范抄写 4。合并句子：可利用从句，非谓语动词， 独立主格结构和连词等。 基础写作 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 基础写作的评分标准？ 1 2 3 4 句子内容的完整性 句子结构的正确性 句子结构的连贯性 句子内容的多样性 Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 作文1 给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the evening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now. Just so so! Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile . Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd. 作文2 I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p