M5U1Task作文范文.ppt

2007年湖南省高考作文： 假设你叫王平，李华是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给李华写一篇毕业留言。 要点：1. 简要描述李华在你心目中的印象 2. 用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述； 3. 对李华表示美好的祝福 写作指导：第一：与2006年相比，题型变化不大，依然是介于提纲式作文和开放式作文中间的一种题型，主要内容给出，但是还必须考生发挥具体事例，这与我们M5U1project的第二篇文章相符；第二：内容变化不大，去年是写老师Mr. Moore，今年写的是同窗好友；第三：考试形式依然是上课时强调的应用文—留言，留言其实和书信，便条差不多。 评分标准：要点全面，且详略得当；结构清晰(总分总); 文章连贯； Dear Lihua Of all my classmates, you, the most considerate and warm-hearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs help.(文章第一段写第一个要点，即文章中心) I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered from acute appendix(急性阑尾炎) at night. It is you who took her to the hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didn’t call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didn’t sleep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our daily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister.(第二段举出你能够想出的最简单的事例，作文的关键不是你的事例有多新颖，而是你写的句子是否能够显示出你的水平，比如说难词，比如说难句，比如说你是否用了联接词，如in order to, until, moreover, so等) All in all, you are the fantastic girl who deserves all the beautiful prospects, such as studying in Beijing University. Finally wish you success and realize your dream! Yours sincerely Wang Ping (第三段总结并给出你的祝福) Dear Li Hua, I often think that I’m lucky that I have you as my best friend. You always lend me a hand when I am in trouble. I remember it clearly that I did badly in one important exam. My parents as well as my teachers thought I wasn’t hard enough. And I was laughed at by some classmates, which made me really sad. But you’re the only one who understood me. You said many words to cheer me up. Thank you for giving me so much encouragement. Besides, when I have done something wrong, you point it out. What’s more, you’re very honest and can alwa