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英语作文批改范例 英语作文 篇一：初中英语作文批改范例 初中英语作文批改范例 书面表达： 以“My opinion on??”为题，写一篇英语短文。 要求：（1）能写出自己的真实见解；（2）层次清晰，意思连贯； （3）书写工整，卷面整洁； （4）字数70—80词左右。 学生作文范文： My opinion on television 庙仙初中九（2）班：张鹏 Television has come into our life for many years. We cant live happily without television. ①It can give us the latest in formation and news. It can open up our eyes and ’ll be boring all day if there is no television. Television programs are attractive. After a whole day’s hard work we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is! It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior. However, it depends on what we do. 教师点评： Well done! How well you made the sentence! ②So smart! You tell me your real thought about television . ③It’s very clever of you to end your work with this beautiful sentence that you have learned! Good! It’s excellent you haven#39;t made any mistakes this time! I’m so glad to see your work has improved! But it’s much better to be creative. You’d better use some short sentences to instead of the long ones . Do you think so?I hope you can work harder and make more progress. Cheer up! 指导教师：姚荣军 工作单位：庙仙初中 篇二：中考英语作文批改案例集(一) 作文批改案例集（一） 【作文题】 假如你叫Mary，你的笔友林强因为学习英语遇到了困难想放弃。请你给他写封电子邮件，告诉他学习英语的重要性，帮他树立信心。90词左右。 【学生作文】 I got your email yesterday. You said you wanted to give up English. But English is the most widely used international language. You will use it when you see foreign movies or read English book. If you travel around the world, you will use English to talk with other countries people, too. The English language plays an important part in our lives. So it?s very necessary for us to learn English well. You must believe that you can do it. I wish you success. I?m looking forward to your good news. 【作文点评】 1. 存在部分语病 2. 文章逻辑混乱，请注意写作文分点阐述。讲英语的重要性时，注意“总分”的关系，分几个部分来说明，第一，在国际上广泛使用第二，在我们生活中英语的使用 3. 注意课本话题相关内容的句子背诵，以及分类： 如： 写到英语的重要性的句子有： 1. There are more than 3000 languages spoken in the world. Of all these lan