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改写文章例子 Paraphrasing Original: On the whole, people are healthier, wealthier and live longer today than 30 years ago. If children were still dying at 1978 rates, there would have been 16.2 million deaths globally in 2006. In fact, there were only 9.5 million such deaths9. This difference of 6.7 million is equivalent to 18,329 children?s lives being saved every day. The once revolutionary notion of essential drugs has become commonplace. There have been significant improvements in access to water, sanitation and antenatal care. Reference:The World Health Report 2008 - primary Health Care (Now More Than Ever) Paraphrased: As indicated in ?The World Health Report 2008-primary Health Care(Now More Than Ever)?, it is can be seen that people have already become healthier, wealthier with a longer life expectancy than that in 30 years ago. If the death rate were the same with that in 1978, there would be 16.2 million children die globally in 2006. Fortunately, the number of death was only 9.5 million, in fact. There is a significant difference between the two numbers, because the 6.7 million children?s lives consist of 18,329 lives being saved everyday. Because the revolutionary notion of essential drugs become wildly accepted by citizens, as well as the access to water, sanitation and antenatal care have been greatly improved. 篇二：古诗改写成小故事 树叶黄了，被瑟瑟的秋风无情地吹走。客居洛阳城里的诗人张籍目睹这凄凉的情景，禁不住想起自己的家乡。 他想给家人写一封信。正要落笔时，心里却涌起千愁万绪。远离故土的自己，有多少想说的话，有多少想写的事啊！长期独自生活的他有多少话想倾诉，借这次机会把想说的都写出来吧！诗人想了又想，终于落笔行书，尽情地讲述着自己与家人离别后的事情和自己的心里话。 信终于写好了，可诗人的心情还久久不能平静。他小心翼翼地将信封好，叮嘱送信人一定要将信完好无缺地送到家人手里。可在送信人即将出发之际，诗人又拆开信封，仔细地看了好几遍，生怕漏了一言半语。 送信人终于上路了，张籍一直目送他，直到他消失在天际。后来，张籍就写下了这首流传千古的名诗——《秋思》。 改写《秋思》故事 2 秋风瑟瑟，树叶枯黄，随阵阵秋风纷纷飘落，洛阳城内，冷风飕飕，让人感觉到秋天的一片凄凉景象。 一个夜晚，张籍来到窗前，一轮明月撒下淡淡的荧光，遥望远方的家乡，他心里涌起一股思乡之情，他随手拾起飘落在窗前的一片落叶，仔细端详着，他的思绪随着落叶飘向远方的家乡，他不禁思念起家乡的父母、亲人?. 张籍出生贫寒，家庭贫困，他从小读书刻苦，十三四岁就远离了家乡，到了二十五六岁就经历了漂泊异乡的生活。十多年中，他虽身居异地，举目无亲，不时感到十分寂寞、孤独，却无思念家乡，想念自己的亲人。 他坐在桌前，铺纸磨墨，正准备给家里父母写信，提起笔，千言万言不知从何写起，顿时，他脑海里浮现出童年时与父母相聚的快乐时光，