雅思写作真题解析寿命长的影响.docxVIP

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思写作真题解析——寿命长的影响 摘要： 本文的Assignment 是问题类的措辞。这个题目是说寿命长对个人和社会有什么影响，其实某种程度上就是问各位年纪大的人对个人和社会有什么影响。  题目：The effects of longer life expectancy both on aging individual and on society  本文的Assignment 是问题类的措辞。这个题目是说寿命长对个人和社会有什么影响，其实某种程度上就是问各位年纪大的人对个人和社会有什么影响。  思路：  1. 对个人的影响  1) 向外看——对年轻人  观点：寿命变长——larger proportion of elders---render the youth disadvantaged in the workplace  论证：It can be observed that young people might be deprived of their opportunities to develop their abilities as more old people could mean that they have more chances to occupy essential social positions。  内部可以配搭实验法。  A group of researchers in the University of Suzhou conducted a research recently on white-collar workers aging from 25-35 in international companies, whose result revealed that three out five people expressed they could hardly get promoted to managerial posts owing to the large number of senior citizens who held supervisory positions。  2) 向外看——对家人  老年人可以活得更久——就可以更好地照顾他们的子女甚至是孙儿，对于家庭的幸福和稳定是很有好处的。  观点：Longer life span could contribute to the happiness and stability of a family。  论证：Longer life span gives rise to a growing number of aging population, who can actually attend to their own offspring who are either too busy to take care of themselves or too young to look after themselves. Offered the proper guidance and attendance from the older generation, the youth are more likely to focus on their own business。  内部可以配搭举例子使用。  Take China for example. Due to fierce competition in society, a majority of parents have to spend most of their time on their work, rendering their own children lonely and abandoned. In that case, grandparents of those children could at least mitigate this situation by giving priority to the younger generation。  2 对于社会的影响  本质法：这是个信息化社会，更多需要的是经验和信息，而年纪较大的人无疑可以提供更多的资源和经验，有助于社会的成长和进步。  观点：Longer life span offers the w