《爱心的重要性（英语作文）》.docVIP

下面是考题： Part I Writing (30 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Significance of Love by explaining the following metaphor with an exact example, “Love is light, being brighter in darker places .” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 200 words. 解析：按照四、六级考试委员会所给内部资料中的评论标准，此类考题考查两方面的内容：即理解和表达能力。 高分作文必须按照题目要求展开，需包含以下内容：1）题目，即爱心的重要性（题目要求需有例子支撑）；2）评论：对于所给名言或警句的评论。 如果只写其中一部分，作文最高得分不超过9分。（注：阅卷时采用原始赋分满分15分。之后经过标准分转化成710分制，写作部分满分106.5分） 从六种功能段落备考角度看，该类作文其实和以前考题没有本质性区别。原来是汉语提纲提出写作内容上要求，如今是英文形式提出写作内容上的要求。 既然都是命题要求，英汉要求只是形式上的变化，本质还是：按照题目要求去写相应的功能段落。 如果写模板作文，本篇作文建议写作思路如下： 首段：现象（该警句所对应现象）+评论 A host of people find it beneficial and rewarding to take part in various activities of love. Meanwhile, there is a metaphor/saying describing the significance of love: Love is light, being brighter in darker places. From my point of view, people in darker places need more love and even a little help can give them hope. 很多人发现参加爱心活动颇为有益。而且，有一句比喻/话可以描述爱心的重要性：爱心就是一盏灯，越是黑暗的地方越明亮。在我看来，身处黑暗中的人需要更多爱心，即便是一点帮助也能给他们带来光明。 二段：意义阐述：阐述爱心的重要意义。 （意义主题句）Love is the key to building a harmonious society, and it can be likened to light in dark places. （具体意义1：词汇排比）To begin with, as a vital quality, it bring people power, arouses their enthusiasm for life, and helps them to create a promising future. （具体意义2：强调句式）In addition, it is love or others’ help that enables people in difficulties to build up confidence, courage and hope. （万能表达：）As a matter of fact, individuals in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of love: love from friends, classmates and family. 爱心是建设和谐社会的关键，而且爱心可以被必做黑暗中的一盏灯。首先，作为一种重要素质，爱心带给人们力量，唤醒人们的生活热情，帮助人们创造光明的未来。此外，也正是爱心是的人们积累起信心，勇气和希望。事实上，越来越多的人们已经意识到爱的重要性：朋友之爱、同学之爱、家人之爱。 尾段：举例说明爱心（即现象）+建议 （举例）A case in point is Hope Project. （调查法描述）According to a survey, a majority of people in China admit that they are willing to help those children, who can not afford tuition. （建议）Thus, we should educate, advocate and