《Water-wri-lan 》.pptVIP

Writing class Designer: Water 文章开头的语言结构组织 功能：抓住读者的注意力，同时选定文章叙述和论证的切入点。 注意：文章的开头务必要简短，三至四行解决问题，太长则是冗长。 糟糕的开头： 1. 开头即道歉 In my opinion, I would like to talk about…But I’m sorry I might… 2.说教式 Youngsters should not smoke. It’s dangerous to do that. 3. 老生常谈 This is a much-debated issue. Some think this way, some others hold that way, and still others maintain their particular perspectives. I, after careful pondering, would prefer that…. 文章开头的语言结构组织 文章开头的语言结构组织 1. 睿智型语言 The most suitable candidate for the country’s president should someday be a foreigner, because whenever problems pop up, most people habitually ask” What will foreigners say?” （Clothes Personality） 文章开头的语言结构组织 2. 戏剧化语言 I know who killed Mr. Robinson. 假设这位Mr. Robinson 是知名人物，他的遇害已是沸沸扬扬、满城风雨。这时，某家报纸的头版出现这样一句话开头或者干脆为标题的文章，想想看该会是怎样的视觉冲击。（小悦悦事件） 文章开头的语言结构组织 3. 开门见山式语言 No country in the world now can afford nuclear war. (scandal, truth) 文章开头的语言结构组织 4. 场景描述式开头 Johnson, an all-A’s graduate from the Riverside High School, killed his girlfriend yesterday after dragging her, head scratching ground, nearly 10 miles. What’s wrong with him. (environment) 文章开头的语言结构组织 5. 提问式开头 China has been running at an 8 percent economic growth rate for two decades. Economists are betting the same trend for another 30 years. So, will China soon make further efforts into space exploration? （less cars in the future） 写作句型 1.be supposed to 应该 e.g. In fact, going on a diet is supposed to be more than just eating little .It should also be about eating healthily . 2. hold fast to … 牢牢地把握住… e.g. In his biography , the message of perseverance and holding fast to one’s dreams in the face of adversity is very strong. 3. bear in mind that … 牢记… e.g (1).Bear in mind that the next generation of cell phones is just around the corner (很快就要到来) (2). It’s important to bear in mind that an assessment(评估) base on the data is only a prediction . The results are not carved in stone . 4. There’s no better way to …t