7凸显表达的新颖性,提高文章的档次(2P).docVIP

凸显表达的新颖性，提高文章的档次 王 斌 文章的新颖性是指一篇文章超越了传统和常规具有与众不同的特征。在考试中，平淡的作文得分肯定不高；新颖的文章会给人以好感，从而得到同档次中最高的分数。 一、新颖性的具体体现 为体现文章的新颖性，我们要从词、句型和文章的内涵上下功夫。可改 可改There was a terrible earthquake in Wenchuan of Sichuan Province on May 12th, 2008. 可改为：A terrible earthquake hit Wenchuan of Sichuan Province on May 12th, 2008. 2.用新颖的副词。 利用某些短语或句型相应的副词，提升难度。如： (1) There is no doubt that computers play an important role in our daily life. 可改 可改increasingly fierce, many students are under great pressure. 可改increasingly severe, numerous students are under high academic pressure. 4.用新颖的介词。 使用恰当的介词短语可使文章的语言更加简洁。如： (1) It’s hard for me to describe the joy with words. 可改’t have passion for English, we will easily lose heart when we are faced with difficulty. 可改为：Without passion for English, we will easily lose heart when we are faced with difficulty. 5.利用词性转换。 有时利用词性转换，会更能抓住读者的眼球，留下更深刻的印象。如： (1) The newly-built Science and Technology Museum is the symbol of the local culture. 可改为：The newly-built Science and Technology Museum symbolizes the local culture. (2) Mary respects her parents very much. 可改为：Mary shows great respect for his parents. (3) I hope that all the citizens are involved in the campaign. 可改为：I express my hope that all the citizens are involved in the campaign. (4) The expert suggests that the authority should take some effective measures to protect the environment. 可改用可改’s education. 可改’s education. 7.用新颖的名词。 用更高级的名词凸显表达显新颖。如： (1) Most people approve of the idea that…可改… (2) Senior 3 students make great efforts to improve their study. 可改为：Senior 3 students make great efforts to improve their academic performance. 8.用句型It is very difficult for me to learn English, 可改为I have great difficulty in learning English. (2) With Mr Chen’s unselfish help, I made significant progress in English. 可改为It was with Mr Chen’s unselfish help that I made significant progress in English. (3)People realized the importance of education when they failed to find jobs due to the lack of diploma. 可改用 可改s’ righ