MBA_ps_推荐信.docVIP

留学申请文件里，个人陈述PS(Personal Statement)的写作无疑至关重要。今天，学博就来针对一篇MBA的申请PS来具体解析一下。A mature student armed with a sophisticated understanding of life and society, I am now trying to build up a business career out of my rich and colorful working experience. In this effort, an MBA education is crucial to me. I am now applying for acceptance into your program because I want to be trained in modern business theories and practices so that I can realize my dream.开头开门见山，讲述了申请目标是什么。文章写得再动人，这种基本信息不要忘记了，别让教授看了半天不知道你到底想申请他们学院里的哪一个专业。As a student, I always distinguished myself with my academic performance. China has a pyramid-style educational system, in which one usually has to pass strict examinati##被过滤## in order to qualify for education at a higher level. For education at a given level, students often have to compete in the exams to enter into a better school. Thanks to my academic strengths, I went to my city’s best high school, where the teaching was so effective that I achieved high scoreds in the 1985 national University Entrance Examinati##被过滤## with ease. Those scores won me acceptance into the Shanghai-based East China Normal University, a major cradle of teachers and professors in China.At the university, I became attracted to the prospect of a business career. A statistics major, I firmly grounded myself in the basics of academic studies and research, particularly mathematics, which I took as the basis for many other areas of studies. I found immense pleasure in crunching the numbers. But I devoted more of my time and energy to studying business and finance, on which I concentrated my extracurricular readings. I believe then, as I still do, that both my future and my country’s future would ultimately depend on how good we are in doing business. To put my business sense into use, I presided over a sampling survey of the middle schools in Shanghai, and published my findings in the university’s League Journal.When I graduated in 1990, the country’s bu