GRE作文ISSUE4【荐】.ppt

Lecture 4 Sentence Variety Section 1 高分原则： I. 主题句原则：主题句不宜过长过复杂,不要隐藏,宜置于段首 II. 二、三点原则： First and foremost， next，furthermore For one thing， for another III.短语优先原则 Bear—put up with Want—look forward to First—be second to nothing Join—engage in IV.多实少虚原则 Vast majority—82.3% Look—glance，gaze，stare，peer, glare V. 累加原则 1.直接串联 Besides， moreover，and，likewise 2.转折 Yet，however，despite，nevertheless，notwithstanding，in spite of 3.因果 Therefore，consequently，accordingly，as a result，for this reason 4.附加语修饰（极限语法） 各类从句 He who speaks does not know, and he who knows does not speak. I don’t know whether I was a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or a butterfly dreaming I was a man. Those who support censorship point out that it is of great necessity for all governments to ensure that dangerous ideas or rumors which may cause civil unrest are not allowed to spread. VI.长短句结合原则 Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrongs that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails. Three passions Three passions, simple but overwhelmingly strong, have governed my life: the longing for love, the search for knowledge, and unbearable pity for the suffering of mankind. These passions, like great winds, have blown me hither and thither, in wayward course, over a deep ocean of anguish, reaching to the very verge of despair. Section 2 变换开头的几种方式 1.—ing groups Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed, “May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.” Hiding from the rain and snow, Trying to forget but I won’t let go, Looking at the crowded street, Listening to my own heart beat, So many people, all around the world, Tell me where do I find someone like you girl. 介词+ing Without leaving his door he knows everything under heaven. Without looking out of his window he knows all the ways of heaven. For the further one travels the less one knows.不出户,足以知天下,不窥牖, 足以见天道.其出弥远,其知弥少. 插入语 Having viewed th