散文英译形似与神似.ppt

译文： If swallows go away, they will come back again. If willows wither, they will turn green again. If peach blossoms fade, they will flower again. The sun has feet too, edging away softly and stealthily. And, without knowing it, I am already caught in its revolution. Thus the day flows away through the sink when I wash my hands; vanishes in the rice bowl when I have my meal; passes away quietly before the fixed gaze of my eyes when I am lost in reverie. Aware of its fleeting presence, I reach out for it only to find it brushing past my outstretched hands. In the evening, when I lie on my bed, it nimbly strides over my body and flits past my feet. By the time when I open my eyes to meet the sun again, another day is already gone. I heave a sigh, my head buried in my hands. But in the midst of my sighs, a new day is flashing past. 燕子去了，有再来的时候；杨柳枯了，有再青的时候；桃花谢了，有再开的时候。（朱自清，《匆匆》） 张培基译文：If swallows go away, they will come back again. If willows wither, they will turn green again. If peach blossoms fade, they will flower again. 太阳他有脚啊，轻轻地挪移了；我也茫茫然跟着旋转。 The sun has feet too, edging away softly and stealthily. And, without knowing it, I am already caught in its revolution. 于是——洗手的时候，日子从水盆里过去；吃饭的时候，日子从饭碗里过去；默默时，便从凝然的双眼前过去。 Thus the day flows away through the sink when I wash my hands; vanishes in the rice bowl when I have my meal; passes away quietly before the fixed gaze of my eyes when I am lost in reverie. 我察觉他去的匆匆了，伸出手遮挽时，他又从遮挽着的手边过去，天黑时，我躺在床上，他便伶伶俐俐地从我身上跨过，从我脚边飞过。 Aware of its fleeting presence, I reach out for it only to find it brushing past my outstretched hands. In the evening, when I lie on my bed, it nimbly strides over my body and flits past my feet. personification 拟人 等我睁开眼和太阳再见，这算又溜走了一日。 By the time when I open my eyes to meet the sun again, another day is already gone. 我掩着面叹气。但是新来的日子的影儿又开始在叹息里闪过了。 I heave a sigh, my head buried in my hands. But in the midst of my sighs, a new day is flashing past. 关于散文翻译的“形”与“神”，翻译家方平的观点给了我们明确的方向。他认为要辩证地对待“形”与“神